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Infestation



Bright hues blind my path
as spent days linger with torture

Memories are plagues without consideration
so we dwell with pasts better left alone

Hells brand follow those willing
but seek out those who have forgotten

Happiness is just an illusion
better left at a persons side
one who is content with themselves...

 

Author notes

This still needs some major work but something is blossoming I think!

Prompt: Seeking Shadows

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Ah yes,.. memories can indeed be plagues and sometimes it's better to let them lie than to seek them! Great take


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    • SuicidalLover
      November 1, 2008
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      Well to let you know I have started and don't know if this is done yet... I feel there is more potential yet don't know where yet.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    "Seeking shadows"

    Let me know if that works, or I'll give you another