Velvet skin awaits
for an equal to surpass
a feeling not real
yet begs for life
Playing with the darkness
a warm aura is felt no less
such delicacies are treasured
for only time can wedge a fading past
Speak softly but do not be scared
as each exhale is taken
we become one with ...
...undiluted passion.
Author notes
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Option: 1 & 2
I recently just went to a vintage store and fell in love with it. I bought three items that fit and tickled me pink.
It been a while since I wrote something decent. Hopefully my muse will kick start soon!
A contest entry
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Comments
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What a great thought for this prompt!
Lovely work here and good luck to you
with it in our contest!
Jeremy0826 -
this poems is very deep & to me thought provoking. you went beyond & to a place that is much deeper than the norm of just sensual & passion.. I love your take on the prompt. Excellent job with the poem.
good luck
kat
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This is just lovely sis! Evokes feelings deeper than just sensual and passion, but of love!
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