travels in between
ideologies,
a contour invisible,
knitting facts
changes with time
neither static nor sterile
none discovers and hold
expand
as outlook widens
what we see is ourselves
fluctuating through moments
if we profess
what is told
they are only beliefs
to ride us as goats
all following leader
at times falling into ditch
sow the doubt
see the light
otherwise you become
sacrificial goat
butchered psychologically
in play of life
Author notes
Prompt
Write an original chant or charm.
A contest entry
- Chants, Charms and Notions by Amunet Wolfbane.
750 points, ended November 9, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is an interesting take on the prompt. I like the style and you’ve some great lines flowing here. I will admit to be a bit lost as to the true purpose of this chant it seems the duality of thoughts conflict here. But overall I do like the style and much enjoyed.
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