We are in love
but there is more
what lies ahead of us?
I give you my hand
it is all I have
and all I ever hope for
take it not lightly
nor with thoughts of
what if's or mights
for better or worse
walk with me
threw what life is
there will be good
and I'm sure bad
let's face it together
lean on me if weak
I will do the same
it will happen
share the joy
we will find it
many differnet ways
I promise us both
never to be boss
never to be slave
I ask for sharing
my life and yours
and all that comes
be my partner
on a grand trip
it is once in a lifetime
as my token of faith
I give this ring with
no end, like my love
Can you say the same
offer me nothing
but share it all
Author notes
this is part Christian part Native Ameerican and part me
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows by Riftkin.
900 points, ended October 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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question
is this bout people expecting more things from a relationship that money can buy
instead of what really matters like love? -
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No
This is about exploring life together and not just call sex love
sex is but a fringe benefit of love - and there is so much more
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WOW!
Congrat on your HM well deserved, plus more!
This was pure beauty and the kinda love that should be!
I applaude you!
Your daughter,
~Lisa~
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This is wonderfully written. I love it very much.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Riftkin
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This is part wonderful, part deep, and all heartfelt. It's not the words that matter,but the actions that come from within. Well done with this.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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Thank You
To me - this is what I would say if I was going to do it
finding someone that feels the same way - is all that stands in the way
Thanks
W W
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