Life
It comes at you fast
Can you hold on?
Author notes
Option 7..
unsure about that last rule.. does that mean try to have less or try to have around that? hopefully it means less...
A contest entry
- LOTS OF OPTIONS! by Shenanigans.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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ha! Very nice. I like the message. It is a little short, but that's not necessarily bad. Right now it hits like a punch in the face...I'm picturing those commercials with like a car wreck or something...
Anyway, I would suggest maybe trying to flesh this out a little... (3 lines is pretty minimal) but if you end up liking it better this way, keep it. It's effective regardless.
My last rule was a suggestion to keep it around 30-40 lines or less... Sometimes people put these epic 200 line poems that would have been so much better if more concise. And with a contest this big, I can't handle 57 epic poems.
Anyway, great write, revise if you want to, and most excellent luck in the contest. --Shannon -
only the strongest will survive! huzzah!
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