What have I done?
I can't stop ,
This screaming in my ears,
I can't stop,
The blood that flows down my arm,
I can't stop,
The aching I feel inside my chest,
I can't stop,
This heart from breaking,
I can't stop,
This addiction I've got,
I can't stop,
Loving you.
I'm sorry,
To put the burden of my love on your shoulders,
I'm sorry,
That I love you so much,
I'm sorry,
That you have to put up with this same old story everyday,
I'm sorry,
That I hurt myself so,
Even though you tell me no,
I'm sorry,
To have put my pain in your hands,
I'm sorry,
That you are the only thing keeping me tied to reality,
I'm sorry,
But I am dying.
But,
Are you sorry,
For saying no to me,
Can't you stop,
With your endless toying ways,
Are you sorry,
For hurting me so,
Even when you tell me not to hurt myself,
Can't you stop,
Unraveling my already broken heart,
Are you sorry,
That I'm dead now?
Now that I think of it,
Your truthful,
Honest answer,
To all of those questions would simply be,
No.
So,
What have I done?
I've killed myself,
In vain,
For no one is,
Going to weep,
Truthful,
Honest tears at,
My funeral.
Author notes
Well I haven't been havin a very good day, so Comment would be great.... O _ o
And, My name is XxMissBrokenHeartxX or Stef, and **Heartbroken-Headcase**
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- First contest,Four options, i'll love you forever if you enter? by Jaffa-.
560 points, ended November 11, 2008, 37 entries
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You succeeded! The reason i put this contest up was that i wanted a good cry and you certainly gave me that. This hit very close to home and i adored it. I loved the repetition and the rhyming was flawless. I'm not going to go on about the best parts because we'd be here all day. But this was an absolutly fantastic entry. I have just one tiny little problem. You need to put what i asked of you in the author notes please.
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ok yea i like this is have done this to being sorry for loveing then and not haveing the love back but yea i love it keep writing and yea im kittie and if you ever need someone to talk to im here i no how this love thing goes and i can help you if you wont my help
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You should never apologize for loving someone. Not to them anyways. But to yourself. Love is pain. There's times when we can't keep from it. The most hurtful form of loving is when the person you love feels differently. I've had many experiences like this with many people. I know how it feels and I'm sorry you had to go through that. At least you gained something good out of the depression...a really good poem. Sometimes it's the poetry that keeps us alive...Anyways...I loved the write. You have a way with words
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brilliant! Keep up the good work.
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great write. "Now that I think of it,
Your truthful,
Honest answer,
To all of those questions would simply be,
No." my fav part. this had a great emotional tie. ♥
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