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Inevitable

They've fallen so far,
from stars to earthly grounds,
but aren't about to give up.
Not yet.
There's still time, so
run, dance, laugh
despite the imminent cold.

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picture prompt, photobucket.com
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  • The Fun House silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a good piece. I like the inspiration of self excuding in this piece; gives it an edge. Very nicely done.

  • carole21
    October 28, 2008
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    nice take . . thanks for the contest entry


  • Samplette gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    A lovely write and nice take on the picture prompt. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam

  • copper29
    October 27, 2008

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    I love the phrase "from stars to earthly grounds." Interesting take on the prompt. Thanks for the read and good luck in the contest!