this was my firt poem.
Your eyes of emerald, shining green,
Into my soul your eyes have seen,
You see the heart that lies within,
Your eyes see deeper than the skin,
Beneath the surface, there in me,
You see the truth that so few see,
You see me as i truley am,
No deciet, no lie or sham,
You look into my eyes of blue,
And so You see me through and true,
You see me, and I see you.
What did you think
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god! My first poem was the worst peice of crap out! And that was the beginning on the year and boy did it suk! This is complete genius compared to mine. even without comparing its pretty good.
"Beneath the surface, there in me,
You see the truth that so few see,"
Thats my fav bit. Great write -
well well well...looky looky who finally posted poetry...after...how long have you had this account...lol...anyway...yeah..I like it but as always...check you're spelling truly not truley.....shame shame....lol...
...ok...woot..way to go...you get the idea....
there you got a hug happy?
*Blessed Be*
Lauren
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