Ambrosia for the mind within the divine rapture bliss is manifest, the complex is common sense and the purpose is always just.
Nectar for the soul and the bones of the untold embrace becoming the frame of the unpainted mural of souls sending unheard cries from freshly dug holes buried with no headstone.
Living for the unfolding of the flesh into unfathomable heights of passion and predation, passed the stars is where you really are.
Distinguished symbols rationalize the categories of supreme focus inhabiting the everthought. Spacialized infinity held by the buzz of solid time binds with the vines of our eyes.
Precious shadow that we call life I feel your pleasure and your pain. Until the sublation I used to wonder why our dreams are torn asunder.
A contest entry
- Your Favorite Work by Violent Glass.
650 points, ended June 21, 65 entries
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My goodness!
WAy to WRITE POET!
Each line is a banquet to chew upon and enjoy!
Every word sculpted as if clay
and we are viewing piece by piece....
"spacialized" wow..that was brillant.
This is full of textures and layers.
A poem you would always come back to
and get a new meaning from!
way to write!
ears/SEattle
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Hey
I loved this one for the most part... It's style is not one I fancy, being that it takes time to wrap ur head around every line, every word.
I don't usually like having to read it a few times, but here it was a pleasure.
I really like how u wrote...
"Distinguished symbols rationalize the categories of supreme focus inhabiting the everthought."
my personal fav line...
Pleasure reading,
peace and love
lost
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thank you man!
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That was beautiful
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well done
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Wow, very powerful. Great flow and so concrete. I really enjoyed this. Thumbs Up!
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This is powerful; short but packed with imagery and altogether a beautiful write. You certainly show us readers that you have a way with words. Thanks for sharing this piece!
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Your talent for rhyme is wonderful, it's not 'in your face rhyme' but rather suddle and flowing.
yet another awesome poem from a much talented poet!
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Fast-Paced, indeed
You outdid me here! I thought I could whip them off pretty good sometimes, but wow! I really can't find anything to critique. You can feel free to reciprocate or not; I like to just sometimes read other's work, so don't feel obligated by any means! This was grand.
Blessed Be,
***Rae***
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well thank you
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beautiful....
the last line ties it all together and tops it off so well.
perfect in every way.
and good luck in the contest.
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this is so full of imagery that i could almost feel every description.
thanks for entering
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thank you!
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great
its good as is changing things too much is like censoring yourself
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