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Acrostic to Marc

Missing all the attributes of you
All the laughter and joy too
Remebering each moment that we shared
Crying in rememberance of how much you cared
Uttering more goodbyes to the man that I love
Saying prayers that you may rest in Heaven above

Belief that we may one day reunite
Every night it's the tears I must fight
Nudging past the memories of pain
Just wishing to keep from going insane
Aiming to see your brilliant face
Mourning for death in this particular case
Insanity reached, trapped in a purgatory of you
Needing the words of I love you too

Yes my angel I love you still
Only with you will my heart fill
Under siege of torment and pain
Needing your words to keep me sane
Going on in life but know my love will never wane

I love you my angel
My Marcus Benjamin Young

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  • AlyssaLies
    October 28, 2008

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    this was well written Im sure marc is waiting for us too waiting to be with us fully and not just in spirit and mind we are definitely all thinking about him


  • melodramatic emo
    October 28, 2008

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    wah this was beautiful and sad so very sad are we all thinking about him doubly at this present time


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Very beautiful and heartfelt!
    I am very sorry for your loss.
    Thanks for sharing this one here!




    Jeremy0826