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Your Angel

You thougt he was your angel, and so you fell in love,

and held onto his wings as he carries you above,

but now his grip is loose, and he will let you fall,

so you hold on araid to loose it all,

but let go and fall ino my arms

i will protect you from any harm,

i'll catch you, look into my eyes,

together we can soar they skies,

your angel is all i want to be,

i'll save you and you'll save me,

be my angel, and i'll be yours,

together spread or wings and soar.

take my hand i'll fly with you,

higher than you ever knew,

if you just hold on to me,

i'll show just what i can be,

don't be afraid to let him go,

fall, i'll catch you, and you know,

that i'm always here for you,

and i just want to be with you

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  • Nikki Rowles
    October 27, 2008

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    You thougt..should be you thought line 1
    so you hold on araid should be afraid line 4
    fall ino should be into line 5
    spread or wings should be our wings line 12
    hold on to me should be hold onto me line 15

    ok...yes I like the poem....it's good...sorry I keep on pointing out the spelling..but there are some people on here that will eat you a live for you're spelling.....anyway...way to go...woot woot...
    [looky you got 2 hugs

    Blessed Be
    Lauren