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Tighten (2)

Every time
I fall to sleep
I see those eyes
looking back at me
every time
I close my eyes
there they are
staring at me
haunting me

He didn't plead
he didn't beg
he didn't fight
he didn't struggle
he just laid their
looking into my eyes
taunting me

I could see
him fading
I could feel
him slipping
I could hear
his heart slowing
but he just laid there
smiling at me

Author notes

So this is the kill from my poem Tighten afterwords, this may end up being a series.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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