Magical air
wind blows
inhale bliss.
He sings
sweet sounds
my heart skips.
His kiss
I melt
so in love.
His touch
sends chills
sent from above.
Our love
cloud nine
forever exceed.
My life
complete
all I need.
Author notes
Inspired by the one guy who completes me.
"If you Love someone then you don't need any thing else"...Unknown
A contest entry
- If you love someone... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so beautiful and a wonderful
dedication to the one that you love.
Well done with this one and I hope
that you do well with it in this contest!
Thanks a lot for sharing it here and keep
up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826
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Yes...this is it..the completion..the joy..and the sweetness of the love..is every thing..you did a wonderful job here..well done..
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wonderful flow, u nailed this all the way. so little words and u expressed some serious desire. my girl! wish someone would write me such an awesome poem. oh well, ill just read urs and imagine its for me lol. much love
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