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Mandy, a comparison

Mandy- A clone.
She was tricked into playing
this horrble man's game.
And while the orrigonal knew,
this man was insane.

He thought-
She'll play my game,
and once she is gone,
I'll be ready for my first girl;
she was so much fun.

But things don't go the way that we plan,
and I'm sure that some day,
this clone will find out.
With all her false charms,
and  high-jacked  beauty,
the man just prepares her to be just like me.

Me- The origonal.
I knew of the game
and this frusterated him.
He wanted an idiot.
(one much like her)
And now everyday I see her walk by;
her makeup,
hair,
and clothes now just like mine.
But there is one quality that this clone does lack.
It's that I'm the origonal,
and he wants me back.

Too bad for him that I can't just be cloned.
Too bad for her that she's too stupid to see;
all he wants is a half-witted version of me.

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Congrats to the Mandy!
She might just be stupid enough to fall for the great transformation we've all been waiting for.

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  • Krick
    October 29, 2008
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    i think you people overestemate me