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Worry

 

 

Shadow's lengthening
day turns to night
Silence harbors worry
coming close to fright

Worry begits anxiety
bringing on fear
Thoughts in collision
resulting in tears

Watching and hoping
for the smallest sign
That misery's foolish
everything's fine

Well past the horizon
my thoughts float away
Seeking good tidings
with the coming new day

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  • piccola silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    my heart picked up its beat as I read your words and looked at the dark graphc. They go together so well. Nice job and thank you for the entry.


  • dustookie2
    November 8, 2008

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    You have taken this picture and claimed it hun.... Your introduction sets it up as you place the reader where you want their thoughts to be.Yet the positive ending of placing all hope in the new day is for me life...no matter what tomorrow is a new day a new beginning for all my woes. There is a gracefulness to your lines that shines through the dark hun. Very nicely penned. Good luck in the contest.


  • the.art.of.drowning
    October 30, 2008

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    that is so beautiful. i have never read something so flowing. it has a style to it. i love it. thank you for entering.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Hi ,Wow, this is so well penned.The picture is awesome and goes so well with your write.I love everything about your write, can't find a fault anywhere.I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Much love and happiness to you.
    Angel-Anne
    (Aka, Anne)


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Wonderful take on this picture prompt
    here my friend. Good luck to you in this
    contest!




    Jeremy0826

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