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In Repose, He Spoke



The tripper
            triggered across
fingerl    es
          in

      where once hid
                            angel children, angle
                              away from



                              hidden secrets
  because, back then
            we laughed wildly
                        at sounds
            she heard      me
                            in

Because, then now it's colder
    and I swear it's wider
up here where
             

                                              we drink the time
                                                                          in.


Author notes


Not sure if it's silly, but it's certainly modern, I suppose.

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  • poetrandy
    October 27, 2008
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    Kind of silly!

    It's a bit non-sensical, too! Good luck in the contest!