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darkness

sitting here alone with only the shadows for company
i know i must surrender to my thoughts
the pain returns and i know your probly thinking too
where are you when i need you the most
i could call and youd pick up
but its never really you
thinking now i wish you were
so many things i need to tell you or what you used to be
its been so long
i'v changed so much and i know you have too
but for now as i sit here the nubmness returns
and the darkness swallows me

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i know it kind of sucks but i just wrote wat i felt at the time

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  • TearsOnHerCheek
    December 17, 2008

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    awsome!!!

    u lie ray. this rox!! i love how it makes you feel so like...there. ya i got back on. i wrote new stuff u can check it out if ya want. ttyl. c ya in english


  • Betting Roses
    December 5, 2008
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    wow this is really good ray! can I ask what it's about?
    IT DOESNT SUCK! NONE OF UR STUFF SUCKS!