I could handle it if you screamed at me,
I could handle it if you cried,
I could deal with it if you threatened me,
Or told me that I lied.
I wish that you would talk to me,
I wish that you would at mention it at least,
I wish I listened to my intuition
Or on his neck not feast
I wish you would do something,
Anything at all
But by doing nothing
My heart and hope dose fall.
can you feel the emotion? how was my poem portrayd?
Comments
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no at in line 6 should read
"i wish that you would mention it al least
line 12 should be does not dose
other then that great work . it flows nicel
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