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Take A Bow

Shame on you, but take a bow just the same.
Who’s the winner in this losing game?
You come and go, love me or love me not.
Are you truly ready to give this a shot?

I hear your words loud and clear
Apologizing, begging, but insincere
You really had me going this time, but
There’s no way I’m buying that line

Shame on you, but take a bow just the same.
Who’s the winner in this losing game?
You come and go, love me or love me not.
Please, love me not.

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  • lonelyboy silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    very well written


  • penman gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Leonura
    October 28, 2008
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    such a very interesting poem. I like the image here. beautifully written.