Shame on you, but take a bow just the same.
Who’s the winner in this losing game?
You come and go, love me or love me not.
Are you truly ready to give this a shot?
I hear your words loud and clear
Apologizing, begging, but insincere
You really had me going this time, but
There’s no way I’m buying that line
Shame on you, but take a bow just the same.
Who’s the winner in this losing game?
You come and go, love me or love me not.
Please, love me not.
A contest entry
- PROMPT CONTEST. by penman.
900 points, ended October 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very well written



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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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such a very interesting poem. I like the image here. beautifully written.





