I sit here, and I realize
Never again will I see "those eyes
The ones that give me butterflies"
The world means nothing
It disapears
No more love to drown out my fears
I realize this is the end
The end of smiles and normal days
I just sit here in a daze
It all hurts I feel like shit
Can't seem to get over it
Those eyes I looked into so many times
I find that those words were all lies
Your gone
It doesn't matter
My heart is so shattered
No matter how hard I try
All I ever do is cry
You meant so much and now your gone
I've got to find a way to move on
Get through this pain
Forget the past
This feeling Please say it won't last
I love you now I love you still
I always have
I always will
Author notes
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I know the last 3 lines are like MEGA overused but it is how I feel.
Let me know what you think
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- FALLING APART by Temptation..
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Comments
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thank you for putting quotations. =]
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wow. this is really good. even the last three cliche lines. three lines dont make the whole thing bad. =] all i ask is that you please put " " around the quote that you used from my poem. thank you so much for entering and good luck.
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Poem:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4293367
Pic:
http://nymphadooora.deviantart.com/art/my-eyes-can-see-colours-3-66177000
Title:
Gone
Quote:
"those eyes...
that give me butterflies"
- POISONDAGGERS
WordBank:
eyes
butterflies
no
love
end
good luck!!!
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