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spirals

Find it in soul
To hide, hide from all is won
In our lose
Until we breath again
In your hearts
Raped from out begining at the start
This is not the end
You can breath the air
Its all
In your prologue
Captain we're sinking
Are even going to bother saving
Any of these souls
Dig your grave as a shallow hole
Implant the graveyard
Search your thought
Can you comprehend my lose
I'll paint you a soul
Just give me yours
So at least I have one

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  • Angel Eyed Baby
    October 28, 2008

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    You know Joe, you have such an amazing way for writing. Reading through some of your writes it easily points out that one tells a story.

    They all are good to me, however, you may not think so but I do and as well as others. I always have enjoyed reading them from the day we started to talk.

    This piece, I like it. It's not so long as the others but still a great piece.

    I look forward to reading more of your writes.

    ~Autumn~