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Pulsating Quivers { Bronze }

Brailled passion,

transliterate by your touch,

soft caresses glide upon moistened skin,

silky smooth...

 

Scented candles flicker,

illuminating silhouettes of curves,

as dark romance of shadows,

dance in elegance of our love.

 

I feel your hot breath,

kissing nape,

sending pulsating quivers,

riveting shots of ecstasy.

 

Senses heightened,

pleasures unfurl,

teasing....

untamed lust...

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  • maralisa silver member
    November 1, 2008

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    wow a delightfully passionate poem the imagery is full of desire I love the border congratulations on your shiny my friend take caremaralisa


  • Leonura
    October 28, 2008

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    sensual and beautifully crafted. though a bit hard on the eyes a chara was the font.but still beautiful.


  • KayJay
    October 28, 2008

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    Your words melt reality and reveal the warm sensuality that lies in your heart... Wonderfully done.
    Ken


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Wow!! Full of steamy passion! Such beautiful emotions, flows superbly! A hot, hot write! Good luck in the contest hunni


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 27, 2008

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    Wow this is so so so super hot and sensuous!!! I need a some cold water please my sis is overheating and the whole house is on fire!!! You did such an amazing job!! So sexy and so beautiful!!! I love the details and descriptions!! I love the way you portrayed this piece!!! Excellent!! And thank you so much for your guestbook entry I love it!!! Sis this is wonderful!!! I LOVE YOU A TON!!! BIG BIG HUGS!!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Gorgeous sensual write hun.. you really create an atmosphere of passion here!


  • daviscth silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    You are so good at making these sensual pieces come to life Julie. I just love the way you write them... Good luck.


  • Alyzeh
    October 27, 2008

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    WOW! That was uber hot and sensual too. Fantastic write Julie. Something about this piece was so soothing and soft, enjoyed the feeling.


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Wonderful... *tugs collar*

    Sensual, enticing & so full of wonderful imagery...
    I love that you can apply your unique visualisation of words to any genre you write in...
    Yet another fantastic piece...
    Well done!!!
    Off for a cold shower now... lol!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    ooohh...this is amazing, nicely done and good luck.hehe...i wish someone would love me liek that

    Stephanie ♥


  • Topaze
    October 27, 2008
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    Very sensual and worded wonderfully, my best wishes.


  • onesugar gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Loved the feel of this hon.
    Wonderfully sensual, created a beautiful image in my mind.
    Good Luck Julie
    ~sugar~


  • chilali
    October 27, 2008

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    Wow! Very sensual and soft with amazing imagery! Great write Best to you in the contest!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Nice work here!
    I love the setting and imagery that
    you wrote this in. Nothing like
    feeling the breath of your lover
    traveling down your body. Lovely
    work here and thanks for taking the
    time to enter our contest!




    Jeremy and Kathy

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