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High Heel Seduction

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Scarlet waves layer upon skin's softness
Silken bow entices of hidden desires
upon limbs
gentle flow gracefully long,
before lavender suede
to heels tease
in poise
seductive modesty.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Beautiful work with this write!
    Very sensual and an enjoyable read.
    Thanks for entering!




    Jeremy0826


    • Rclane gold member
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank you for the time you've invested in reading and commenting on my ramblings.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job with this poem. its sensual & inviting.. I love the imagery that you've used within this piece.

    good luck
    kat & jeremy


    • Rclane gold member
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank your time in reading and commenting on my ramblings and the chance the let my muse come out and play......


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Amazing poem that is seductive yet elegant
    Colours vibrant bringing this bow a sexy feeling against her skin.
    Best wishes
    Julie


    • Rclane gold member
      October 28, 2008
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      Thank you for the time you have invested in reading and commenting on my ramblings....


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Good lord I didn't need to be reading this sexy stuff tonight Wonderful work here my friend. Whew!

    • Rclane gold member
      October 27, 2008
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      LOL don't blame that on me.....Thanks for reading and commenting.....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Beautifully done.. I love the sense of anticipation in this sensual write!


    • Rclane gold member
      October 27, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your time invested in the reading and commenting of my ramblings.....

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