I wonder why i cant cry.
I wonder why i cant seem to rely
on you anymore.
I cant seem to feel anything anymore.
No more broken hearts because i wont
take it anymore.
The pain that you brought to my life?
I cant feel life anymore
I cant seem to care for you anymore.
I dont want you back.
But i do want to show you
my masterpeice.
A small gift, from me to you.
Follow the trail of blood.
into the hospital room.
Isn't it pretty.
This is what i call...
My blood bath
A contest entry
- Sadness and Despair by PoetryStar2.
400 points, ended November 13, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It was very painful to bleed out of my throat but also a memoriable one.
Comments
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It describes of how i had my life threatning throat injury and how painful it was to see the blood pouring out of my mouth. -
this is good alot of thought and contemptment good luck in the contest
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