Clueless embodiment of the female kind
maybe even in spirit, but what of her mind
Silent observer of others she sees
programed to obey, service and please
Constant refusal to go all the way
not a participant in the games they play
All the confusion she does conceal
questions sensations she has yet to feel
Author notes
3. There she doesn't blow or do windows either
10 lines more or less
A contest entry
- PROMPT CONTEST. by penman.
900 points, ended October 29, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be courteous and comment..NO rude or critical critiques please.
Comments
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Brilliant take on the prompt. Your lines flow with ease as you paint the picture in your words....nice rhyme
Congratulations on the Silver
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Interesting take on the prompt
my friend. Well done and good luck
to you here!
Jeremy0826
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Good take on the prompt, a watcher of behaviors unwilling to be a sheep that is expected. Well done and best to you.
Mouser
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Good take on the prompt sis
all the best in the contest
xxx Judie xxx
loves ya bunches
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