Broken, prosthetic heart,
you took my emotions and ripped them apart.
Was it all just a mistake from the start?
You lied to me,
I can't take this anymore!
I HATE EVERYTHING!
Never fucking lie to me again!
Your proverbial chains slash and break the skin,
How could you do this?
You said you wanted everything with me,
You said I was your life and love,
you said never to worry anymore.
But my love crashed upon the floor,
the shards stab my bloody bare feet,
Your heart was never broken or sore?
you used me, you bruised me, I'm beat.
Now the anger surrounds me!
the hate eats at my mind,
the pain left my bodice to collapse upon the floor.
I can't take this anymore.
NOW I HATE YOU!
I can't take this anymore.
AND I HATE MYSELF!.
Don't ever lie to me again!
A contest entry
- For The Liars, The Cheaters, The LOSERS!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended November 13, 2008, 36 entries
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A bit unfinished isn't it?
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This seem lyrical to me, and yes could have went further - but still very well expressed. Angry, pained, and powerful. Thank you for your entry!

