behold
brothers deaf and blind ...
the time will come
that faces
will float
on fire
screaming:
give us
the Living Water
Author notes
Prompt:
1. Hot and bothered while standing in a mental igloo == I know this is not exactly what you where looking for, but I could not resist.
Art: Melissa Farlow
In a list
A contest entry
- PROMPT CONTEST. by penman.
900 points, ended October 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So glad
to C U won HM for this! Short & very potent & oh so visually gripping! U R the only person beside me listing in Prophesy! That's how I found this. If ppl only knew, right? Good job friend.
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Congratulations on the HM. It's only a matter of time until your prophesy comes true. That day, every knee will bow and every tongue will confess.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for my trophy ...
and for the points. I appreciate your encouragement.
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Well crafted friend!
A definite scarey message to repent! Wonderfully penned even if it does not fill the bill!
Mike
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The watered too late and dead. They can not give us comfort now. They may not be dead to us, but we are dead to them.
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Mom of my heart, (Myra)
This to me reflects like a hope like from being lost to salvation being perhaps rescued before its to late and the mercy of cries heard.
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The living water which, once tasted you will never thirst again.
Water is such a powerful symbol. It perfectly fills any vessel it enters, takes on its shape, and fills in any gaps or spaces.
Perfect use of the word.
Garrison
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Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Flame to fire
When earth crashes
We know evil must
Definitely expire
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We are getting closer to that time all the time, it is the scariest thought I have...
C
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GREAT write! This is amazing! Thank you so much for sharing this. Good luck in the contest
Much love
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hot stuff . good luck
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Literally poetic and having profound meaning
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