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every day

every day of your life
you've gotta sit there
you've gotta lern
to hold on tight

you ran
when you were young
now you've gotta
keep your faith

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    Short but it sort of tells it like it is. But do we really have to sit there? I think not. Yes we need to learn but we have the power to change ourselves and effect those around us. We are all here to help each other. A though provoking piece.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    Really sweet!!

    Precious From Your heart to Gods ears! many blessings Dear. I am your mama's friend  Rend

  • goalsv
    October 30, 2008

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    A very good and short piece filled with good advice. Nice form. We sometimes can only hold on tight, at least for a while.