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Time Goes By

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Autumn.....
I find my hair falling
with the leaves
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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11
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    many ways to see this, some quite delightful...PK

  • Rmh4933
    November 11, 2008
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    awesome

    so beautiful and telling


  • Naughtygrlred
    October 29, 2008
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    Me too


  • poetgirl25
    October 27, 2008

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    Wistful, beautiful

    Very introspective and as always, thought provoking, even if it did put a bit of a smile on my face at the visual this evokes, but that is the soul of poetry right? to bring out different emotions from the reader, to attain different levels of meaning...


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Always the most beautiful haiku--when I see you if I am online I read your poems and am never disappointed--thank you!

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