days
the days come and go,
but my feelings for you are forever.
and so,
in my mind we will forever be together.
the temptations are unbarable!
i want to hold you close
(dont let me go!!
im so addicted to you that it hurts...
love is what i have for you
i love you
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A contest entry
- your best prewrite. by jayyniecakes..
400 points, ended February 24, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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first 3 lines... papa roach?? lol maybe not
sounds like it.
Really like this.
i want to hold you close
(dont let me go!!
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lol ya its not :) im glad that you like it :) thanks alot,
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i love it!! definatly tugs at the heart strings
peace, love, & cheese -
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awe thanks
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i know how that feels.... ;[
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thanks for the gold love!!
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"i want to hold you close
(dont let me go!!"
i LOVED this part. it echoed in my head, rang through my ears. short and sweet, and yet very deep.
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thank you so so much!! >.
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Deep! I like it.
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thanks
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kool
it turned out pretty kool. i like the second to last line!!!
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thnaz
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hey! no more pic! lol! i still love the poem! lol!
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ya no pic lol
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lol!
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i hate this pic! lol! but love the poem! lol!
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lols
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its not funny! lol!
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PAY ATTINTION NXTTIMES :))
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PBLT!!
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you kno its tru
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WHATS TRUE?
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that u sjould pay attiotion to the camera
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ok i will, but you have to tell me when your taking a pic! lol!
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okssss
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aww thts a pic of the 2 of u? cute.
change the font color tho
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yeps its me and ivan!! i had to catch him not looking lolz
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lol cuteeeeee.
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