i // would //cry!!
i would cry if you died,
dont commit suicide,
i dont want you to die,
ur my alaby..
for living this life.
why would you want to die?
im your life line ...
dont do this to me ..
my love will never die...
critical review:))
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I FREAKEN LIKE THIS ONE
Y WOULD I CRY IS COOL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK UR ON UR WAY
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THNKS!! im gonnna read some of yours soon
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thanks =D
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i like that background on this poem and how the letters are all crossed out its really cool like that, the feelings are there and also expressed well, keep writing, ~Amy
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AGAIN THANXS!!! ^-^
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