Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

You're My Angel...

My best friend in the world.
10 years together, no matter what.
Through thick and thin
Always to the end,

Whether guys or family,
Friends and fights,
Or a tornado warning
On a sleepover night?

These things are us,
The good and the bad.
The camping trips together,
The happy and sad.

When you were hurt,
And I was there,
When I was torn down,
You never left my side.

We've always been there for each other,
No matter what the others say.
When your hurting and you're ready to die,
Remember love, I'm always by your side.

When I've been torn and trampled,
When guys have broken my heart,
You've always been there to lift me up,
And to blow the guys world's up

You've been nothing but amazing,
For these past 10 years.
I love you so much sweetheart,
So for now, no tears.

Author notes

My most amazing friend in the whole world.. Victoria. Love you sweetie

<3
Option 1.


"and she will be loved"

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Ms.spooki
    June 16
    Edit | Reply
    quite lovely,i fancy it


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 25, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wonderful friendship
    Thank you for your entry
    Good luck in the contest


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    November 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A realy nice poem very well written a lot of emotions and Devotion.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED,


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ah.. an eternal joy is felt through the words you described about her and your love for her..making me smile through the words...well done...


  • Rhythm Child
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    ...

    We've always been there for each other,
    No matter what the others say.
    When your hurting and you're ready to die,
    Remember love, I'm always by your side.

    When I've been torn and trampled,
    When guys have broken my heart,
    You've always been there to lift me up,
    And to blow the guys world's up

    i love the last 2 lines of the top quote there beautiful and really show your commitment to your best friend, the top 2 lines of the second quote also i think are particularly special because they show that both of you have have devotion to eachother, you have a special bond that is not seen to commonly
    well done


  • LenaLust
    October 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    cool poem,
    i liked it.
    i could see the emotion and the love.

1 - 6 of 6