never before
or since
have I seen sunlight
so crystal clear
and the swaying grass
on the hillside
was an hallucinogenic mirage
a symphony by Beethoven
was interwoven with the threads
of conversation
the affected buzzing sound
preceded the silence
A contest entry
- with a rush by Melissa Gayle.
900 points, ended October 28, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - they won't know who we are. by swim.x.
600 points, ended November 11, 2009, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is quite simple but it really is stunning.
Very well done.
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Thank you.
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