Drink life by seepage
looking down on juices
apples and oranges flow
through frozen dreams.
Held to heart, open
toward the warmth
sunshine looks up
into crying cradles lost.
Flower the bloom
pull your head from glass,
frowns stow
and anchor endless pain.
Pick flowers wild
or domestic to charm life,
held in thoughts giggle
dancing love released, beyond.
Author notes
Credit: Escaped into Life by adeadrockstar @ deviantart
A contest entry
- You have two choices. by Never Fall in Love.
750 points, ended November 11, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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The idea was good and most of the phrases were original and well put - however I think there could be some improvement in the transition between lines. As it is now, the flow is choppy and it doesn't read well.
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What an amazing poem, so filled with vivid and amazing emotion. I so enjoyed reading. Keep up the amazing writing. hugs Theresa
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