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go ahead-- let the melody tremble; grasp at straws and beat on steel drums-- we were never alone



inferior in quality;
worse off than any
standard issued,
truck stop variety,
toilet paper
ever known
to the elite
upper-tier
of high society;

translucent scratchiness--
leaving dampened fingertips
and a lingering film
of urine and god knows
what else;


yet Soul replies in song--
a melody of recognition
for treasures
once misunderstood:

the freedom of knowing
peace inside this skin;

the wisdom of humility
and right-sized living;

the paradox of growth’s
potential unleashed

only in the clamor of confusion;
in the decay of desperation;




yet Soul sings--
replies to things in life
bought and paid for
without the aid
of deep pockets
or shadows
above a crib




and the Harmony stays-----
carries the tune--
infallible.

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The full title is actually:

go ahead-- let the melody tremble; grasp at straws and beat on steel drums-- we were never alone to begin with, you know;

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Comments

  • March Muffin
    November 2, 2008

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    beautiful. i love that you use toilet paper to get at the economic status of the living situation. I've never really thought about it, but the metaphor is absolutely perfect.


  • Miss Faith
    October 28, 2008

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    oh, you...I'm so happy your back.

    I miss your stuff.

    this was amazing.

    "the freedom of knowing
    peace inside this skin;"


  • Phineas Red
    October 27, 2008

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    And you say you missed MY writing. I read this once, and then saw the full title, and loved it even more the second time.

    a great piece.

    i've actually been trying to get back in to writing, it helps put away my bad feelings at the end of the day.