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Contemplating

Missing image
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Reposed upon fallen leaves
the view astounds me,
how miniscule I am.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Such few words paint such thoughts
    Congratulations on the silver
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • penman gold member
    October 28, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very reflective and well expressed in its brevity. Best of luck in the contest.

  • carole21
    October 28, 2008
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    nicely done . . thanks for the contest entry

  • WinterEssa
    October 27, 2008

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    Short, but very effective. The background/color scheme works well with the poem and prompt. Best of luck

  • copper29
    October 27, 2008

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    Humans are definitely so small as compared to nature. Nature is vast. Humans are tiny and insignificant little marks on her beauty. Nice job with the prompt and good luck in the contest!

  • Mickie27
    October 27, 2008

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    This is a beautiful and moving write. Absolutely wonderful Sam I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing this, this was so powerful and yet so few words, but so much emotion.

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