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Halloween Party!

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Pumpkins to carve
goblin juice on ice
Finish my costume
all flashy and nice

Hang the decorations
skeleton on the door
Mommy's  baking cookies
who could ask for more

Tonight I will be a Pirate
but with ribbons an lace
Sword by my side
and a sneer upon my face

I will be the captain
of my ship and crew
A Halloween Party
there's so much to do

So bring your bag or bucket
and don't forget your smiles
Candy filled to the brim
neighborhood goes on for miles





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Happy Halloween I hope you like it!

Background my own created from free clip art. Picture from exclusivelyatsatisfaction.com

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    Excellent Writing

    Congratulations on the Silver!


  • penman gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such a gifted creation for the contest. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver.


    • tawk gold member
      November 4, 2008
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      Thank you I had so much fun writing it. hugs Theresa


  • PrincessOfFire
    October 28, 2008

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    I hope you have lots of fun. I sure would. You made Halloween a wonderful holiday to celebrate.
    Thanks for sharing this wonderful write. Rose


  • libithina
    October 28, 2008

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    Loved it, loved it, loved it !!!

    Loved it, loved it, loved it
    Background brilliant soo bright and colourful and cheering ..
    Oh Theresa my 'candy bucket' is overflowing
    with so many delights from this delicious read
    Dearest sister
    All my love,
    Lib x x x


  • moonbumps silver member
    October 28, 2008
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    Ooooo I so wish I could be there!!!!!!!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    This is so cute!
    I love your poem and your background here.
    Very creative and a lovely read!
    Good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826


  • The Poetic Angel
    October 27, 2008

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    perfik for children Aunt Theresa

    Good Luck in the contest

    xxx Judie xxx

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    I think that this is really cute and I love the bck ground great job here thank you for sharing good luck in the contest best wishes always


  • PonyPride
    October 27, 2008
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    very nice, I enjoyed this. I loved the innocent imagery! Great Job and best of luck


  • WolfHeart
    October 27, 2008

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    AAaahhhhhhhhh

    How adorable. You really have a knack for children's poetry. And what a pirate! Gather all those memories together for a time ahead when she is grown. Sounds like a perfect party to this old lady.

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