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Trapped

A beautiful rose, unchallenged and wild
A rogue spirit in a world of followers

Looked down upon, cause she was different
Her head in the clouds instead of on earth

They always laughed at the oddity
Walking around with no shame

Never once did she keep them outside
Let them all in to see the real her

Upside downs and even backwards at times
She never once played games

Elegance in a plain background
Standing out against the crowd

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Credit: Escaped into Life by adeadrockstar @ deviantart.

Alright fair enough this sucks lol

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  • Never Fall in Love
    November 11, 2008
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    The idea is good, however I think there would be a more poetic way to have this written out.


  • Sick Sunshine
    October 27, 2008
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    I like the idea. have never met somebody like it though. =/ friends don't like to stick around.