After so many times i have tried
After many times I've lied
To tell you the truth, I'm not fine
It's gone so far, I think I've lost my mind
My plastic mask is melting away
I'm done, I've got to get away
3 different times I have tried
3 times to attempt a quiet suicide
1st a bottle of poison to stop the pain
2nd, drink a bottle of poison like it's a game
3rd, I must try an overdose
I thought it was going to work the most
No nothing worked and I'm still hear
For the future I still fear
After so many times I have tried
After many times I've lied
To tell you the truth, I'm not fine
It's gone so far, I think I've lost my mind
Author notes
I wrote this. I'm not going to explain myself to anyone. It was eating out my brain, I had to get it out.
A contest entry
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1300 points, ended November 2, 2008, 23 entries
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Wow
I like it. I exprese very strongly felt feelings. I feel like the girl in the pome does. I hope this is not true kiddo. If it is I wish there was something I could do to help.
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