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The Pleasures of Paris

enough with x_quickies_x every saturday night
How can I >>return>> to the country
after I've ::seen:: P a r i s?
Sorry love♥
      second best just isn't.good.enough (anymore)


[[give me something real,
  something more.than.this]]


my [insides] are .:copper:.
      ((and I'd -kill- to make.them.gold ))
after a l  l;;
only the best for the best 
      (( for both you&me ♥ ))


[[you //are// the best


  aren't you?]]

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Prompt: my insides are copper and I'd kill to make them gold

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Paris is A.m.a.z.i.n.g!

    I loved it.

    I also loved the question you posed at the end of the poem.
    This is a great write.