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Will's Special Day

 

 

Hear the rumble,

feel the ground crumble,

as the monster truck comes by.

 

It is so big,

a giganic rig,

almost touching the sky.

 

It wants to say,

it's a special day,

as it spins a wheel.

 

Off it goes,

and the horn blows,

"Happy Birthday Will!"

 

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  • Accidentally Poetic
    October 28, 2008

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    This is so wonderful, thanks so much for writing.
    Will is just going to love this. Best of luck to you.
    Crystal

  • Mickie27
    October 27, 2008

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    I loved this it is a lovely poem for me to finnish the day with. I love the illustrations that you have used it kind of completes the poem. What I love about this is the basic words that appeal to a child. The sentiment is there and a child would be able to understand this poem without difficulty. It reminds me of innocence that a child has. It was just lovely, sweet and nice. It will give me nice dreams.


  • daviscth silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    LOL This is adorable and he is going to love the picture!!! Thanks so much for making this for my grandson.