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Embryonic.disasteR

Molten meltdown reactor
Lurid lacerations spread faster
Common denominators factor
Fallout in this embryonic disaster

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A contest entry

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  • darksyren
    January 29

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    i like your style

    hey man, new to the sight and checking out peoples work, I really jive with your style and think that our work has a simmilar rythmic flow, I'd be honored if you'd check out my stuff.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    this is a brilliant poem.. wow I love the first line.. excellent job with the prompt.

    kat


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    Wow, this has an awesome flow to it! Love the rhyme tom nice beat. Superbly penned bro!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    this has a wonderous flow, nicely done and good luck. thank you for entering
    Stephanie ♥