Reading the quote
"Trying to forget
Someone you loved
Is like trying to remmeber
Someone you never knew"
A tear appears
In her green eyes
And she tries so hard
To smile
She thinks of the way
He now talks about this girl
Like he used to talk about her
At the start, that was
They expect her to forget
Forget the way he made her smile
Forget the hour long phone calls
And to forget someone who was once her best friend.
The tear from her eye falls and she whispers "I miss him"
Author notes
Option 1) Love - I would prefer sad/broken hearted love... Thats what i love reading about... but if you think you can blow me away with a happy ending one then go for it... Ill admit some people has...
Prompt: Quote - "trying to forget someone you loved is like trying to remember someone you never knew"
"The hardest thing to do in life is to watch the one you love, love someone else."
A contest entry
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i loved this
i was once the girl you described
you made my eyes water simply remembering the feeling
and you describe it so well
gret write
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Holy cow I know exactly how this feels. I hate the feeling so much.
There are few words for how this poem made me feel, except to say you read my heart and pinpointed my exact sentiments. Thank you so much for understanding
and for entering my contest.
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congrats on the trophy it is well deserved. I like it. Flows well and you really feel emotion in it. Thanks for sharing it. Thanks for entering it into my contest.
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This is very touching, very simple but yet so powerful too. Thanks for entering.
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WOW!!
This was an amazing write... I pretty much feel that same way.... Im really sorry for what you are going through.. I have been there, done that and it aint very fun... It sucks hurting... and wanting someone that you cant have... keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!!
Shannon*Leah -
you have a way of reading my mind and *POOF* a poem appears.. haha
this is amazing!
Angie
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