Have I told you lately how very important you are to me? That to be without you, I would be but half of who I am, half of who I need to be. That because of who you are, without you, I would not grow, to become the person I hope to be.
Have I told you lately, how it is that you complete me, not just in the fact that I am not alone but that I am truly fulfilled in all facets of my life. That I am truly happy.
Have I told you lately...
That there isn’t another out there who has brought so much into my life, nor could there possibly ever be another.
Have I told you lately...
That this ring of gold around my finger is more than an compelling circle of pretty gems and stones, it is more than a promise of forever. To me, it is a symbol of our completeness a joining of two opposite and yet like ends which come together to mesh so perfectly that you cannot tell where one ends and the other begins.
...We are that...
We are that, which picks up where the other leaves off, not just in words or actions
but In the very being of our essence together.
Have I told you lately...
How sexy you are when you walk away or walk towards me. I am completely powerless over the feelings that you infuse in me.I am Lost in your male beauty, that sweet maleness that is so different from my own self and I can’t help but succumb to you.
You touch the very depths of my femininity and create desires in me some of which I can not explain but can only express to you through the return of my own touch.
When we make love What happens between us is so incredible that sometimes I want to cry. ...The feelings are so overwhelming.
Have I told you lately…
That no matter what it is that you need from me, all you have to do is ask and I will do my best to see that your needs are met. I love you so much and there aren’t words to express exactly how it is that I feel because these three little words; I love you…
pale in comparison to how deep my feelings for you go. I want to be with you beyond forever, I want to be with you for all eternity and I have never felt that way for any before you.
Have you heard from me lately...
The words that you have needed to hear? Because if I fail, if I become so wrapped up in other things that I neglect for one day to let you know exactly how much you mean to me, or just how wonderful it is; this affect you have on me, all you need do is say so, I will hear you.
Have I told you lately...
I want you, I need you, I desire you….You and only you…
Have I told you lately...
just how grateful I am that you choose to be with me. That you choose to be in this life together. That no matter what happens we will be together taking care of each other, supporting, and fighting for what is Us, because I know how deeply you love Us… too.
Author notes
Inspired after reading: Foreplay, Teasingly and When You Touch Me by MJ Donnelly
A contest entry
- Encapsulated In Love. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended September 20, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If you have been in love click here by MysteriousWhisper.
400 points, ended October 20, 38 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Beautiful. I love this. great job.
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WONDERFUL
this is simply the most beautiful letter i have ever read and your words are so filled with love and admiration for your mate...heart felt, warm and deeply tender...congrats on the trophy well earned indeed
niaish so much for sharing such heart warming beauty with me
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Whispering Wind
Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this and respond. It is an honor
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Nice...
This is really a good and sincere comment on loved ones. I could easily write it about my wife. You use words like a paint brush. I am new to this site and enjoy discovering all the wonderful styles.
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Pogo7747
thank you so very much for your sweet and thoughtful words.
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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thank you for the beautiful and heartfelt compliment. It is grately appreciated.
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Lucky Bugger
Your other half is a lucky man and those comments from Vera Rich just don't make sense to me. Perhaps she confuses you with another poet she read. What I love about the story is the honesty and passion. It need not make sense to anyone but you and those who feel as you do.
TC
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I'm not sure what the previous comment is all about-- although I have difficulty reading from some backgrounds, white on black is not one of them, and I do think this is legible.. as for being appropriate for the contest, I do think this fits for the "Laden Heart" one -- it is very long, but it is truly a lovely letter, full of "snippets" of wonderful examples of a deep committed love. I'm sure your husband will love it, if he hasn't told you that already! Good luck in this contest!
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Hawkslake
Thank you so very much for your comments, I too felt the comment below was rude and unnecessary, i sent her a note saying so and removed the poem from her contest. I should remove her comment. My husband did love it Thank you
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This is such a wonderful love letter. It took me a long time to find my husband as well and I thank God for him everyday.
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thank you ...I now have the husband and relationship that i always dreamed of, he is all that and a bag of chips...lol
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That was so beautiful..
It was all that I could have wanted to tell my husband.. I could see someone sending this to their husband to be when they were about to start the wedding.
It's a very wonderful tribute to what a woman and a man share when they love each other so deeply and completly..
Good luck in the contest!
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xXxSeductiveLovexXx
Thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments. It is greatly appreciated.
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This is so deep. If your husband is worthy of all of this, then I want him (just kidding).
Excellent! Fantastic! Wonderful! Superb!
Keep up the good work.
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Thank you Ms. Wyatt, Yes my husband is all of this and more. He didnt come easy and I had to kiss a lot of toads before I found him. You cant have him, but I might be willing to share...lol...Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
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I am willing to share if you are...I could use someone to fix my house :-)
You lucky girl!!!
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Beautiful
Excellent write, a tribute the loved one...where is this woman? I want one just like her. This did it for me:
If I become so wrapped up in other things
That I neglect for one day to let you know
Exactly how much you mean to me
Or just how wonderful it is
The affect you have on me,
All you need do is say so, I will hear you.
Have I told you lately that
I want you, I need you, I desire you
...Good job
Vito
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Beautiful
Thank you so very much for your heartfelt comments...What can I say...It's that good! and I was just spilling my heart out to him.
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WOW!
My god, this is so very beautiful! I'm sure he had to feel as light as a feather when he found out about this piece, gosh this kind of love is so rare I'd bet my life on it that he would trade you for all the tea in china!
excellent, moving piece!
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Swangrnv
Thank you, This piece moved a lot of things...shhh I didnt say that!
Thank you for taking the time to read, I really appreciate it. xx's
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Thank you for your beautifully expressed entry, Josie
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"Have I told you lately that
I want you, I need you, I desire you"
Those words are the quintessence of any strong romantic relationship. Well done, and I'm sure he will appreciate this; I know I did, but I'm a poetic romantic anyway.
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