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Of Petals and Thorns.

Affectionate words
    beautifully spoken
    that only leave thorns
    when love's petals

    fall

    away

    ...


Author notes

13 Words
Prompt::
"Venom"

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  • Exodus gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Very interesting take on the prompt. I really liked your title to be honest, worked nicely with the piece but has a ring all of it's own. I don't think the triple punctation at the end is necessary though.

    Thank you


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    it is a shame but sometimes the only thing left are the scars
    Good Luck
    Juls


  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    wow, this is amazing, i love the ending, it just flows, and is sooooo beautiful . nicely done and good luck
    Stephanie ♥