Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

a mist to go beyond

sitting in the clouds,
absent to the ground,
thoughts as soft as gentle rain
falling all around.

just like an angel's kisses
spirit's consciousness upon,
and mind was suddenly a mist
that i could go beyond.

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • TheRemnant
    October 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love the imagery! and mind was suddenly a mist
    that i could go beyond. are my favourite lines. Overall this poem is very good, keep it up.


    • moonspirit
      October 29, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      thanks

      am just getting used to this new site and didn't find the comments on my poem buttontil today...thanks for reading this and leaving your thoughts...