One more day,
One more time,
Jump on the computer,
Think about that poetry site.
Here for 2 years,
Wow...
Check to see if I have comments,
Look who left me this!
I cant believe,
Its been this long,
It feels like only an hour!
So many thoughts,
and Prayers to read,
Every new piece a journey.
Life cant go on,
without a piece in History.
Dear Cyn
Thankyou for who you are,
Thankyou for who you've been.
You have helped so many-
Through the good and the bad,
I am proud to say,
I have a friend
on AP like you!
Author notes
Ok, Its a little Corny, But I wanted to write something before the contest closes! Thanks for all you do, and everything I know you will do. Heres to many, many, many more years on AP. *cheer*
A contest entry
- 'Come Celebrate My Two Year Anniversary on AP With Me!!' by Cynthia Gaines.
2000 points, ended November 8, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you feel when you read this?
Comments
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Thank you for everything, and for being a friend!!
Chrissy, I really appreciate your very thoughtful poem's message, and I'm glad you entered this heart-warming piece in my two-year anniversary contest!! 
You are an angel on earth!! 
"There is nothing on this earth more to be prized then friendship" ~Saint Thomas Aquinas Peace, Cyn 
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This is really cute and a heartfelt write
to your friend! It's a wonderful feeling
to find someone that you can turn to
all of the time. Well done and lovely
work here!
Jeremy0826 -
This is such a heartfelt poem to your AP friend. I think you did a really nice job with it, and I liked how you made it a tribute as well as a thought-provoker that we all will relate to. Those first 3 stanzas could pertain to most all of us on AP! Anyway, there was one thought in particular that truly drew me in, and it was this one:
"Life cant go on,
without a piece in History."
How true! Excellent job.
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Well, to be frank Just for Cyn really means just for cyn. Anybody else who reads this poem is going to be confused. Perhaps you could have written about Cyn and described the person in your poetry. This would give the reader an inside view of why you feel this way. I think that would make a great poem and focus or an irregular attribute or something very positive. That would not only be for Cyn but for the readers on AP
Keep writing!
-AtiVan -
i think you wrote a lovely poem. bravo!
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