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Cinnamon Stick

With cinnamon stick, she stirs to sip
to sip the apple cider mulled
while mulling over when your lips
your lips last grazed her own

Her own were rosy, apple-bit
the bit removed, the bridle off
Far off she galloped, now you sit
sit saddled and alone

Alone, and yet, when apples fall
in Fall she still takes heart and hopes
she hopes that you'll be back to taste
taste cinnamon and trace

The traces and the harnesses
for harness horses long to pull
the pully over blinders, wool
as woolly sulkies go




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  • Nickelspring gold member
    June 11
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    I love the taste and feel here. Lovely!
    K


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    There is something quirky about this wreath that just totally appeals to me. There's bittersweetness here, but it still makes me grin.


  • Tears In Rain
    October 28, 2008
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    This has a deliciously fall feel to it, and gallops along nicely.


  • Cynewulf
    October 27, 2008

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    Yes, very good. I actually hate cinnamon. It makes me feel sick (& I have eaten Tindaloos).

    I like scrumpy cider though.