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Nameless December

Silver thorn wrapped in gold,
Restless tomb once adorned.
Broken bones that was in moaned,
mended by a heart of stone.
Empty letter in silent ink.
The winded gap in each of "I"
will depend on varying "it might"

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  • Whispers of Hope
    November 25, 2008
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    Wow this is unlike anthing I have read very well written nice job here!!