Some Prevelance Devastating

Praying to the gods of solidarity,
Spewing up some putrefaction,
Ebbing away at some dead-ended insanity,
Some fatal subtraction,

Ever-green heart-break some
Devastating heart-ache,
Breathing out such mistakes,
More than all that I forsake,

Some blazing red-alert,
Alarm bells ring, reverberating,
Static continuity feigns innocence,
Such prevalence devastating,

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Random, just found it in my notebook and thought I'd type it up and post it

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What Went Wrong? (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart. 490 points, ended January 12, 37 entries
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Danna Hobart
December 30, 2008
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Thank you for entering.

Mickie27
October 27, 2008

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Brilliant work. Some really interesting imagery here and very creative. Obviously we have different beliefs but, I respect yours. I liked all the different imagery.

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